Miniature World

• Amazing things pic story - choose a picture from the file sent to you in your writing folder.Make a new writing document and title it.
• Your story should have a hook in sentence, a beginning middle and end, descriptive words, long and short sentences and capital letters and full stops.
• Your story could have paragraphs, speech and speech marks, alliteration, onomatopoeia and similes.
• Edit and check your story on your own , with a buddy and have it checked by a teacher before you blog.

Wow look at those workers but what are they doing.One is on top of that apple but it is a huge apple. One of them was Andrew and the other one was Kingston but one more was called Phoenix.There is three of them down on the ground but still what are they doing. It looks like they are helping that guy, by the way ,what is that guy doing up there.They are trying to get a piece of apple so they could taste the apple.Also what are they going to do after that big stuff? Are they going to help each other today when they go back home? Or are they going to help that person on top of huge apple.By the way, are they going to help each other today to go back home and are they going to be tired after that big lot of work after that day. There is four here.The man is in there. By  the way they are so little and they  have got small hats and  they have got small shoes.By the way what are they going to do after that? Are they going to take that with them back home?